Monday, April 13, 2009

Poem a day challenge...

Day 12 Prompt: "So we decided to..."

Love disconnected...

So we decided to call it quits
end this charade we call love
leave behind our sweet beginnings
and promises of

"It will never end..."

go our separate ways
to the music of our generation
a lingering hauntingly sad refrain
played and sung in the minor key

against all hope we've joined this
chorus in our decision to be free


Edit: This isn't personal guys...just written for the prompt. :)



  1. mmmmmm, but it's better, right?

  2. I'll bet it was personal at some point in your life, though I doubt it is right now.

  3. Hmmmm, it certainly was personal at one point, two points even. Fortunately, we never came to the end in my poem. :)

  4. I've never experienced the mutual break up...I hope that I never do now.

  5. glad you mentioned it wasn't personal... :( Had me worried for a minute...

  6. Very emotive even if it wasn't personal *hugs*

  7. Sure it was a personal thing, this poem you've written. Maybe not for you but I personally related to every line Eaton.


Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.