Monday, May 18, 2009

Thoughts of the state of the world...

Poverty by go1985 at deviantART


The Cry is not

against the rich
just how they got it
fatted calves with
greedy eyes who
peruse with distaste
the poor as they
grovel for more





Love,


6 comments:

  1. now that's harsh reality. here, there, everywhere...

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  2. The Cry is not

    against the rich
    just how they got it
    fatted calves with
    greedy eyes who
    peruse with distaste
    the poor as they
    grovel for more

    I really admire this short piece Eaton. Technically though I think it is begging for punctuation to separate the thinking of the narrator into the 2 coinciding thoughts presented.

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  3. Eaton...It's a perfect little piece!

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  4. It is a poem to make you think.
    Are all the rich like that?
    Do all poor people grovel?
    Is nobody happy where they are at?
    I have an over active mind. Sorry.

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  5. There is an amazing amount of power in the simplicity of this piece.

    Fabulous.

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  6. Yes..this planet is peppered with it! Wow..some picture..
    Hey..hope you have a relaxing and safe Memorial Day weekend Eaton!
    Thanks for bringing your cheer to my blog too!

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Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.