Photo borrowed from Stumbleupon, so long
ago I can't even remember who I should
acknowledge.
Just a little piece of fun...nothing serious intended. :)
Frustratingly hard to fathom,
the deflection of your affection
I'm the same, you're the same,
what made you turn from
my direction
I'm feeling bad, mad as hell,
spurned--not taking it well
Cursing and yelling,
my thoughts are shallow,
emotions hollow;
the echo of your voice
will follow me into
tomorrow.
~~
Have a wonderful weekend everyone...
If you've written 55 words, no less no more, go on over to
G-Man, let him know and he'll pay you a visit!
Love,
But you did the fun seriously well ;-)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed that.
Were you at my house this morning?!?
ReplyDeleteAlways a pleasure to stop by;)
Welcome Back Eaton...
ReplyDeleteYou were sorely missed...
Your 55's ALWAYS thrill me...
Thanks for answering the call...:-)
No offense, Easton, but it didn't come across as "fun" to me. Good. But not fun.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by my playground. Excellent 55. Very different and I enjoyed it :) Have a great weekend :)
ReplyDeleteOnly you humans could write such a poem and then say have a wonderful weekend.
ReplyDeleteGreat 55
Ours is posted
HERE.
Perfect meter and scheme. Loved the technical aspects of this one.
ReplyDeleteI just caught that comment above by Fandango..how funny. I've always enjoyed your poetry and this is great! Everything just flows here. Last week I tried to get in here but had so much trouble with my computer..(we switched phone lines..at least the days of dial up are over) ha..anyway, I'm here! Have a great week Eaton!
ReplyDeleteYou always bring a smile when you stop by-