Friday, September 4, 2009

Liquid mysteries...















































Lunar lapses hide behind white cloud patches,
spot-lit seaweed scented memories roll and pitch
across uncharted maps, gull's wings flap, soar on
currents blown south across an unknown ocean
from Gulf Somewhere.

Waves of sea green froth roam sands beyond
the horizon, flat-lined on white peak mysteries,
spoken of by bold old mermaids.

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If you've written 55 words, no less no more, go on over to
G-Man, let him know and he'll pay you a visit!



Wow! How fast did this weekend roll around? Have a great one everyone. :)



Love,


18 comments:

  1. Beautiful words with a great sense of change.
    Excellent, as always.

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  2. i can smell the salt in the air

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  3. Yes I can feel the salt air as well!
    Excellent 55 Eaton..
    You have warmed my heart with your return...:-)
    Have a Wonderful Week-End....G

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  4. I would love to visit the seaside! Nice pics.

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  5. Feeling a touch of the Mystic are we Eaton? Good one.

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  6. Really enjoyed your 55.

    Thanks for stopping by my place - I'm actually English but don't hold that against me!

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  7. "Gulf Somewhere" Damn, that is some fine writing.

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  8. Thank you for stopping by my playground. I appreciate it. Wonderful 55. Love the bold old mermaids :) Have a good one. Aloha :)

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  9. This was just beautiful Eaton..just packed- I mean every line and the soft white photos of the ocean, the foam and gulls are excellent! Nice job-

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  10. I forgot to mention how lovely your header looks as well- hope you have a great weekend Eaton-

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  11. What a wonderful 55 my friend. I love "Gulf Somewhere" Excellent. And thank you for stopping by my playground. I appreciate it and more importantly being the first person to ask the question. Tune in next week :) Mahalo

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  12. Was in the moment and felt the salt too my friend, a wonderful write and perfect for Potluck...thanks so much for linking :) HUgs xxx

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  13. love the beach images, the last one is especially breath taking...
    beautiful poem to go with is..
    thanks for sharing!
    fabulous treat.

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  14. One wonderful poem for this Monday theme...so glad to enjoy it!

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  15. Enjoyed this. Solid.

    Cheers

    Luke @ WordSalad


    mine are here -

    http://wp.me/pTeVg-aS

    http://wp.me/pTeVg-6N

    http://wp.me/pTeVg-5w

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  16. So evocative! I love the strong images you created. Just lovely!

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  17. Beautiful words.. vivid images.. a wonderful job done with imagery.. great piece of beauty here.. :)

    Happy Potluck
    http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/05/26/water-and-wind-and-an-un-grained-me/

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  18. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/

    help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
    Thanks!

    hope to see you tomorrow.

    linking in as soon as we are open is more helpful for your poem to be viewed.

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Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.