Friday, October 30, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday...

Indigo blue, indelible in a crease-less velvet
sea of stars, securely woven into the fabric
of night, oblivious to the naked search
of an eye

Lone stars reflect a single poignant truth,
witnesses to an unfolding destiny, undeniable
in brilliant clarity - observed in a period of
time intoned in the voice of an angel.


For more 55's visit G-Man at Mr. Knowitall.

Spring is here and looking her very best in Melbourne. It's warm and sunny, with a whole lot of humidity...very inspirational for writing 55's. Have a wonderful weekend everyone. :)




  1. You've captured the true depth of the universe here. Excellent.

  2. Great 55. I love the picture, too.

  3. what a harmonious 55...and the pic plays well with it! i could swim in your words.

  4. You are so beautifully amazing Eaton...
    Thank you so much for this breathtaking 55...
    You Rock The World!
    Have a Great Week-End....G

  5. i don't know which is more soothing... your words or the picture.

  6. Thanks everyone, this one filled me with peace as i wrote it. :) I'm out of town for 36 hours...will visit more 55's when i get back. Eaton.

  7. The angels tone rings through clear and brilliant.

  8. A beautiful 55. I'm always amazed at the ability of one to put together something both lovely and meaningful in very few words. I came via Shadow's site, by the way. I like your space...


  9. This is fabulous..your words to this unbelievably enchanting capture- smooth!

  10. Its beautiful.. I enjoyed it so much.. you write so well... thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  11. smart entry...
    Glad that you still entered your piece.
    love the imagery.
    perfect poem!

  12. beautifully penned Eaton. Lovely

    Luke @ WordSalad

  13. What could be more beautiful? Like the deep serene yet mysterious universe.. awesome!

  14. Words of an angel, really enjoyed this poem!

  15. Greetings! How r u?

    You are invited to join our potluck week 13 at Jingle Poetry :

    Write a poem fitting our week 13 theme (Dreams, Visions, Reveries), post it, and link in to our potluck, you are also allowed to link in unrelated poems. we are open Sunday, 8pm, American central time.

    We have had so much fun having you last week. I cannot wait seeing you on coming Monday again.

    Let me know if you have questions.

    Have A Weekend As Graceful As Your Writing!


  16. Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy

    Thank you a ton for the lovely contribution!
    Happy Friday!
    See you next time!


Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.