Friday, February 19, 2010

Promises...55 Flash Fiction Friday

It's really late and i have to go to bed so I can work tomorrow night (not fall asleep on the job) ...I will be around the 55's over the weekend, enjoying and commenting. Have a great weekend 55'ers! :))

Visit Galen at Mr. Knowitall for more fascinating 55 Flash Fictions.



I can't help but fall into your promises

your eyes do that to me, make me want
to hum lullabies to unborn babies. Uncover
mysteries that glint in the sunlight between
a man and woman

Some promises are like that
like a fat sleepy cat stretched out
on a windowsill; purring - satisfied

Slipping into you




Love,

10 comments:

  1. nice...sensual 55. like the image of the cat...i feel it.

    my 55 is up!

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  2. Oh GOD
    This is so beautiful
    Everything in this blog has attracked my attention from the beginning
    Superb 55
    Pleased to meet you
    (thank G MAN!)

    Hugs;)

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  3. Excellent, Eaton! I really connected with this one.

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  4. This is a masterful piece of well woven imagery.

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  5. You are full of passion...
    And you write from your Heart.
    To be loved by you Eaton certainly would be special.
    Lets hope they appreciate it...:-)
    Beautiful 55 My Dear.
    Thanks for playing and visiting today.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G-Daddy

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  6. Losing ones self in love is never a bad thing when the love goes on for a lifetime.

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  7. I love the way you write Eaton.

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  8. It took me more than a week, but I did follow up on that 55 you wanted more of.

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  9. I'm glad you found the comment and made it over. I'll try to finish the set this Friday.

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