Friday, April 9, 2010
Oceanic disturbance
Restless white tipped waves challenge my mood.
Tease me to soar through
soft
feathered
distant winds.
Searching depths darker than the indigo of night,
bluer than my eyes.
I turn my head back to where I came from,
my day dream broken.
Snapped back. Splintered on a sharper reality;
senses heightened.
Liberated by my flight.
~~
Happy, happy weekend to everyone! :))
If your in the mood for more 55's, visit G-Man at Mr. Knowitall, or if you fancy writing a 55 G-daddy is the man to see.
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wow, what a serene and beautiful 55, i love the music that goes with it, your clock says it is 2:30 am where you are i am just waking up it is 8 in the morning to a wonderful cup of fresh brewed coffee from Guatemala.
ReplyDeleteYou build a great image with those words. Perfect for the picture.
ReplyDeleteEaton...
ReplyDeleteAlways classy..Always beautiful.
Loved your 55.
Thanks for taking the time to play today, Yours are always perfect!
AND...Have a Kick Ass Week-End..G
beautiful 55...love to just lay back and relax in the water...float and let all my cares float as well. there seems to be something that happens here though...perhaps drifting don the shore away from where you started or worse a rogue wave...nice quite sure. nice one though.
ReplyDeleteYou may have to return to the reality but the best part is you have to go through the dreams first.
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ReplyDeleteGlad to see you linking up...
ReplyDeleteyou have a beautiful mind and blissful spirits..
blessings,
love your 55 poetry.
Liberated by my flighted.. very beautifully portrayed...
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Om Namah Shivaya
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