Excellent words. Enjoyed that.
nice. i like the textures of the scent and the feels...secrets can be scary things...nice 55.
Eaton...You are such a wonderful writer.I hope you are back on a regular basis.loved your 55...Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass week-End
beautifully played 55.love the images and the feelings your words bring.mine is here
Vivid! Love the last line!
Excellent. Nice to see you're back Eaton.
Love the flow and great line breaks. Enjoyed the reminder of observation about how much energy required to deny or ignore a secret. Thank-you.
Both sweetness and truth in this! It made me think of insecure new lovers.
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