Monday, May 2, 2011

inevitable




















 

the sun's shallow rays
grow distant, feeble -
inconsolable, i witness
the small death of autumn


love,
Eaton

 

12 comments:

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

very lovely..

Glad to see you shine.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

How are you?
Please consider making a contribution to poets rally week 43 today,
A free verse is appreciated, you rock!
Happy Thursday!
Hope to see you in.
xoxox

shoelessboywonder said...

Well done verse,it flows with such precision. Look forward to reading your work next weeks rally.

Sree said...

lovely blog;)

JamieDedes said...

Eaton, this is quite lovely. Kudos!

Stunning flower above.

Eaton Bennett said...

Thanks everyone for appreciating my work.

Jaimie, the flower is an apple blossom, one of those newer varieties. I can't remember which though. :))

Anonymous said...

Utterly beautiful, truly struck a chord with me.

Eaton Bennett said...

Thank you Anonymous, a moments experience in my garden. :))

rebecca said...

this speaks to me in moody coloured farewells, then s l o w l y welcoming hellos. as the circle of the blessed seasons unfasten our hearts.
so glad we are walking mindfully together through the changes.

Regina said...

This was a moving piece..the image and wow..your header is fabulous!!

rebecca said...

still loving this with every read.

do come for a visit today, the doors are wide open and joy is in every detail!

Eaton Bennett said...

Regina and Rebecca, thank you, good of you to read and comment. Much appreciated. :))

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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