tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post4345871253695738693..comments2023-10-22T08:25:25.748-07:00Comments on Passionate Fiction: Flash Fiction Carnival.Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-55776773769049190652008-04-23T18:30:00.000-07:002008-04-23T18:30:00.000-07:00Wonderful! And fiery! *wink* Sorry it tool me so ...Wonderful! And fiery! *wink* Sorry it tool me so long to comment, but I really loved this. Passionate and hopeful and romantic all at the same time! *hugs*Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01033156229224246978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-79665848015150733432008-04-23T02:41:00.000-07:002008-04-23T02:41:00.000-07:00Eaton, way to go, very touching and dramatic. Lov...Eaton, way to go, very touching and dramatic. Love that he can't wait to be with her, and she is trying to ease his soul. Love the name of your character too, wink*Tess Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10268019211135424840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-90831205097386651572008-04-21T08:26:00.000-07:002008-04-21T08:26:00.000-07:00I often wonder what it would be like to wait for m...I often wonder what it would be like to wait for my man while he fought in a war, and what it would be like upon the reunion.<BR/><BR/>You've given me a clear idea of at least one way it could go (the good way!). Thanks.<BR/><BR/>And thanks for commenting on my slew of entries into the FFC, too. I really appreciate the time you spent doing that.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-54675539666480525682008-04-18T12:57:00.000-07:002008-04-18T12:57:00.000-07:00I love how she loves him, passionately and without...I love how she loves him, passionately and without judgment. Kinda got a lump in my throat at her rip-roaring desperation to see him again...<I>snif</I><BR/><BR/>xoUnhingedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08299084905191628448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-74990741609921486872008-04-15T19:35:00.000-07:002008-04-15T19:35:00.000-07:00Wow! This is truly powerful! I particularly like...Wow! This is truly powerful! I particularly like this: "Pretend all is as it should be. Pretend that man does not wreak havoc upon himself. That innocence still prevails." That is beautiful sentiment. And that he burns his commission papers - oomph! Great job, Eaton!A. Catherine Noonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01375569313449912140noreply@blogger.com