tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post6301185739807646018..comments2023-10-22T08:25:25.748-07:00Comments on Passionate Fiction: Monday Potluck ~ practical application...Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-10626078862567056062010-11-17T05:48:02.044-08:002010-11-17T05:48:02.044-08:00Well done, Eaton. Read the article too.
You'...Well done, Eaton. Read the article too. <br /><br />You're a fine poet. Kudos for this piece.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-32667726832719868292010-11-13T11:40:55.822-08:002010-11-13T11:40:55.822-08:00Dresden's lace captured me from the beginning,...Dresden's lace captured me from the beginning, with it's fragile beauty shattered and scattered between war and memories and broken lips that will never speak again. How powerful this timely poem, one day after we honored our fallen soldiers, this looks at the mess we left behind; in so doing we see the beauty and fragility of porceline dreams and lace on dolls.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-70736966816685043322010-11-12T03:59:00.909-08:002010-11-12T03:59:00.909-08:00Thank you Olivia, I am enjoying Monday Potluck. I&...Thank you Olivia, I am enjoying Monday Potluck. I'm enjoying reconnecting with some of my earlier work and hoping to write more in the future. I'm enjoying reading the great talent in the Potluck too.<br />Thanks so much for your kind interest. <br /><br />Thank you to everyone who comes by to read my poetry, you very much appreciated. :))Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-91863594470057559432010-11-12T01:25:26.885-08:002010-11-12T01:25:26.885-08:00I hope that you have enjoyed your participation at...I hope that you have enjoyed your participation at our Monday Potluck, we love your talent and appreciate your willingness to share.<br />You are welcome join us this coming Monday for another week of fun, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.<br />Let me know if you need further assistance.<br />You Rock!<br />xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-71097149539984028712010-11-12T01:25:07.947-08:002010-11-12T01:25:07.947-08:00Thanks for sharing this one Eaton- this is so mean...Thanks for sharing this one Eaton- this is so meaningful and Intense.. very well composed.. :)<br /><br />Love xxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-4750232653784463052010-11-11T11:04:32.301-08:002010-11-11T11:04:32.301-08:00great poem. loved the reference to Dresden at the ...great poem. loved the reference to Dresden at the end. excellent job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-37432621882092531602010-11-10T06:21:35.531-08:002010-11-10T06:21:35.531-08:00http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010...http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/<br /><br />awards 4 u...<br /><br />Happy Wednesday.<br />xxxJinglenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-43612759538977718272010-11-09T22:25:46.910-08:002010-11-09T22:25:46.910-08:00Dear Eaton
thanks for sharing such a lovely verse....Dear Eaton<br />thanks for sharing such a lovely verse... It was a great joy to read your beautiful words... <br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-65339287567599279752010-11-09T16:07:36.613-08:002010-11-09T16:07:36.613-08:00my dearest Eaton, you tickle me with your infinite...my dearest Eaton, you tickle me with your infinite talent here....<br /><br />eggs, birds, churches, wow,<br />these are divine.<br />thanks for the support to JP.<br /><br />keep rocking.<br />I value your kindess.<br />xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-83816434875337699052010-11-09T07:38:00.013-08:002010-11-09T07:38:00.013-08:00Eaton, man, you melt my face off every time. Too m...Eaton, man, you melt my face off every time. Too much delish poetry and clever wordplay in here to quote any, except I'll say that 'from inside the Church on the Hill' stanza is pretty darn clever. But some of the imagery further up is just stupefying. Hey look, if you're interested in a group environment in which poets give and receive constructive crit to fast track our learning, I run one. I mention this to those whose poetry has leapt out at me, and those I feel would fit in/benefit/etc. Often the novice poet can't take honest crit, it stings too much if they've invested too much of their ego in it. Personally I much prefer honest feedback. How will I learn if everyone just tells me how good my poetry is all the time?<br /><br />Great stuff man (the link to the group is on my blogroll (WordSalad WorthClicking))<br /><br />Luke<br /><br />(mine are here -<br />http://wp.me/pTeVg-cx<br />http://wp.me/pTeVg-cPAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3383849938969538573.post-16134485372957307612010-11-08T23:55:05.975-08:002010-11-08T23:55:05.975-08:00i love how you relate war with the scarring on dre...i love how you relate war with the scarring on dresden lace figurines..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com