Thursday, March 27, 2008


This is a new adventure for me, I have never been interested in poetry before.
Over Easter I had a compelling urge to try my hand at some. I had poetic words
and phrases running around in my head the whole time, rhyme and rhythm
keeping me up at night :)


Cravings draw me to your door
I can’t stay away
no not anymore

Aching to fulfil this Lust
I have to have you now
I must

Senses cry out to explore
hurry please
I implore

Lingering at your door
I beg you
just once more

Desire binds me to you still
bending me
to your will

My thirst for you
no longer
can I slake

I can’t make
this hunger wait

Too late! Too late! Too late!

It was difficult to write and took a lot of twisting and turning in my mind to get the words just how I wanted them. I now appreciate poetry on an entirely different level. I hope you enjoy my deeper musings :)


  1. Nice twist of words, Eaton! I like. Poetry can be a lot of fun!

  2. Wow - what a great first shot, Byz! Very intense. *hugs*

  3. I like it! I agree that poetry is much more difficult than it looks to write. Great job!

  4. Hey Eaton, I was tagged, so now you are too! Tag, You're it!


Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.