Thursday, August 13, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday...

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fluid blues meandering down my spine
each finger tip a rhythmic trip unlocking
muscle knots, easing tension lines

seeking dip and dimple, simple to
explore; slipping, dipping, skimming
every cell and pore, soothing, smoothing
pressure points, tissue begging more

stroking, kneading, stress releasing each
warm sweep of oil:

your finger pressure;
a measured treasure--pleasure.


It's Friday aaaaaaand the weekend, hope yours is a good one... :)

If you've written 55 words, no less no more, go on over to
G-Man, let him know and he'll pay you a visit!



  1. It eases tension just reading it. Beautiful.

  2. I have to agree with Anthony, one can feel it as the piece is read. Well well done.

  3. Whoa....I must say, I almost need to take a cold shower now. What a fantastic 55.

    Mine once again is shared. You need,as always, to click on the link at top or scroll down my entire Friday blog.

    Have a great weekend.

  4. How did the song go.."I need a lover with a slow hand."

    Very erotic, yet tender.

  5. We dragons sometimes walk on people's backs. They say it feels very good. Of course, we transorm to our smaller size first.
    Greeat poem for a human.

  6. Thank you for stopping by my playground. Much appreciated. Very erotic 55 I loved it. WOOT. Have a great Friday my friend. Aloha :)

  7. Wish I had tried that before. Now my physical condition prevents me from laying face down but I can read your blog and dream. Yes I can.

  8. I could use one of those right now. My back is killing me.

  9. Wow Eaton...I need a cigarette!
    Very sensual 55.
    I loved it!!
    Thank you so much for creating such a relaxing mood.
    Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

  10. That was lovely ---made me want to go out for a massage.

  11. Now I want a massage! LOL

    Great descriptive writing. :)

  12. how soothing, this is fabulous!

    happy weekend to you too!

  13. That is s soothing piece indeed, & very well written!


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