Friday, August 28, 2009

No promises made or kept...

Photo borrowed from Stumbleupon, so long
ago I can't even remember who I should

Just a little piece of fun...nothing serious intended. :)

Frustratingly hard to fathom,
the deflection of your affection

I'm the same, you're the same,
what made you turn from
my direction

I'm feeling bad, mad as hell,
spurned--not taking it well

Cursing and yelling,
my thoughts are shallow,
emotions hollow;
the echo of your voice
will follow me into


Have a wonderful weekend everyone...

If you've written 55 words, no less no more, go on over to
G-Man, let him know and he'll pay you a visit!



  1. But you did the fun seriously well ;-)
    Enjoyed that.

  2. Were you at my house this morning?!?

    Always a pleasure to stop by;)

  3. Welcome Back Eaton...
    You were sorely missed...
    Your 55's ALWAYS thrill me...
    Thanks for answering the call...:-)

  4. No offense, Easton, but it didn't come across as "fun" to me. Good. But not fun.

  5. Thank you for stopping by my playground. Excellent 55. Very different and I enjoyed it :) Have a great weekend :)

  6. Only you humans could write such a poem and then say have a wonderful weekend.
    Great 55

    Ours is posted

  7. Perfect meter and scheme. Loved the technical aspects of this one.

  8. I just caught that comment above by funny. I've always enjoyed your poetry and this is great! Everything just flows here. Last week I tried to get in here but had so much trouble with my computer..(we switched phone least the days of dial up are over) ha..anyway, I'm here! Have a great week Eaton!
    You always bring a smile when you stop by-


Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.