My city - Melbourne
photo by me...
Night-time
full of secrets stalking alleys,
waiting impetuously around every corner
to fulfill dark promises made as day slips into black.
Glaring street lights see into every naked nook,
every infidelity - every nasty deed
insidiously swallowing the day’s spent light
and yet,
innocent, your beauty transforms the very night
that keeps your secrets.
~~
Have the best weekend everyone. Aaaaaand for more 55's please visit G-Daddy at
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Love,
17 comments:
Great words and picture. Yes, the dangerous is so often beautiful. A strange contradiction, isn't it?
Love the picture. So hard to get away from that glaring light seeing into every naked nook. Loved that line. Just beautiful and a little haunting.
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Friday Flash 55 ~ The Girl in the Mirror
smiles. love your 55...your beauty transforms...there is something beautiful about the city, even amidst all its challenges.
my 55 is up!
Dark beauty My Friday 55
beautiful photo...
I love your lines...
wonderful 55!
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shakira
Who knew that Melbourne was so mysterious and Dark?
hehehehehe...
Excellent 55 Eaton.
You Rock The Outback Baby!
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick ass Week-End...G
All that secrecy makes me curious. Beauty was never proof against me.
Terrific 55. Beauty and mystery in darkness. Also like your use of Walking Man's quote at the top of your blog - excellent. My 55 is HERE .
Oh Eaton, I didn't know about this blog of yours... Love the poetry and the photo! :)
Your words painted some wonderful images. Very mysterious and a little scary, till the last line, when the light shines. Good job.
Wow Eaton, this is an amazing piece of work. So few words [55] yet it really paints a fabulous picture and drills up a fascinating mystery of secrets.
Loved it.
Hope your weekend is treating you well...thanks for stopping by.
dear friend,
your 55 is unique and fabulous.
love the city night image.
Happy Monday!
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This was terrific Eaton!! Love that city image- it so complements your poetry!
Forgot to mention how your red flowers look so incredible and cheery!! Very lovely-
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glad that you voted...
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I am thrilled to hear from you.
BEST!
u rock!
get well soon!
this is beautiful. I like the antithesis in this one!
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