Tuesday, July 27, 2010

are your eyes open...

they see you; pimped, parading your plumped mercenary cleavage,
your glossed scarlet lips offering opulent promise - hedonistic felicity:

smudged by careless immorality you roll
a shot in the dark, two single pips - snake eyes
winner takes all, loser takes the fall.

with a pocket full of packaged stardust, you stalk the night,
looking for fools wandering this liar’s paradise
seduction seeks its own.

new converts - innocents the prize
while Angels cry...

6 comments:

  1. This is too true. I think you articulated your idea very well.
    Keep it up.

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  2. Wow..this was a mouthful- ya, I would say you expressed yourself very well Eaton (smile)- I do hope you have a wonderful day- (btw) your page looks so bright and colorful- lovely-

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  3. witty poem.
    Glad to see you new post.
    Happy Thursday!

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  4. amazing!
    'with a pocket full of packaged stardust, you stalk the night' : this is excellent.

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  5. Hey Eaton..just wanted to say hi and thank you for your concern! Seems so up in the air sometimes? Are you still pretty busy with family? Have you been writing much? As I said, your site is so pretty! Anyway, I enjoyed your visit! Have a great day (hugs)-

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  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
    pick three awards from my post,
    pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.
    have fun!
    Take good care.

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Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.