Friday, December 10, 2010

first love? 55 Flash Fiction Friday...












I need 55 words to describe
the moment
the unprecedented moment -
boy meets girl’s parents
poor boy
looking calm
breathing easy
brave - shaking like a bowl of jello

the girl is so nervous she
introduces them as mom and dad
the guy floundering
says hi Mom, hi Dad...
one eye on the exit

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True story, happened at my house this Friday 10th December, 2010.  :))

Have a happy, fun filled weekend 55'ers everywhere!

Visit G-daddy at Mr.Knowitall for great 55 words of wisdom, witt and wonder.


lots of love,

Eaton

13 comments:

  1. hehe...ugh i remember that moment...in the pitof my stomach...smiles.

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  2. Awww Eaton...
    I Love real life 55's
    Your's was perfect.
    Thank you so much for your well wishes.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  3. An uncomfortable moment for all involved I'm sure. Nice to see you back doing a 55.

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  4. Eaton, this is darling. Thanks! Big smiles. Hugs!

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  5. Hey there Eaton! I wanted to comment last night via my phone but nothing would go through? I even re-started my mini computer ha. Normally I can click the link above but same post)? So I'm here to say what a cute story this was! I can imagine..this put a smile on my face!!
    Thanks for visiting me too..no problem just as long as you don't stay away too long! (lol)

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  6. Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

    Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

    Link up a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

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  7. Checking to see in any new posts, Eaton, and also hope you had a pleasant holiday and best wishes for the new year.

    What a fabulous header - it's a celebration! Lovely.

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  8. Beautiful header!! Just wanted to wish you and yours a lovely weekend and warmest wishes for a bright New Year!! Hope your Christmas was delightful! Look forward to more of your inspirational posts in the coming year-
    Hugs, Regina-

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  9. What a great 55! I love it. Thanks for the smile and the music.
    All sweet stuff to end the year and start anew.

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  10. delightful! i'm so glad to be past that stage, heee hee heee

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