Tuesday, April 27, 2010

rasberry tipped Tequila secrets... 55 Flash Fiction Friday






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Come away with me
pack a bag,
pack Tequila.

We'll watch raspberry sunrises
drunk on curiosity sated by warm
water swims; salty skin lemon rind dry,
while our pomegranate-syrup eyes
follow the ebb and flow of tides under
a ripe moon heavy with lazy longing.

memorized rosy tipped Tequila secrets;
bottom of the bottle safe.

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Cheer up, Friday rocks after knock-off time, have a wonderful weekend everyone. :))


Love,

18 comments:

  1. sounds like a wonderful time...under those raspberry sunsets...nice 55.

    mine is up!

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  2. You make me feel like I'm on vacation.

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  3. Beautiful and fruity!!
    Excellent 55 Eaton....
    You sure know passion My Friend.
    Thank you for always being so classy.
    Please have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  4. tequila never sounded so good!!

    too bad i don't drink any more!! ever heard the saying 'tequila makes her clothes fall off?' yep that's me!!

    great 55!!

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  5. How nice and vacation like!
    how fun!
    Mine is here
    I have three 55 to offer.
    Hope you like them.
    Have you a blessed weekend!
    hugs
    shakira

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  6. this is perfect for a friday 55! sounds like a great way to end this work week...well done eaton!

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  7. Pass the glass and lets dance. Gone for a poem this week based on the Etheree form created about twenty years ago by an Arkansas poet named Etheree Taylor Armstrong It normally consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable. I added an extra row for the word count and the punch line. See what I mean here.

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  8. Mmmmmmm, I'll drink to that kinda end of the day any ol' time.

    Mine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.

    Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!

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  9. This is a delicious fruit salad of a 55.

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  10. Thank you so much, Eaton for leaving a message for me ...
    I am so sorry you could not find the page...
    hhhmmm....
    Have you a great weekend!

    hugs
    shakira

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  11. I hear the glasses clink! Sounds dreamy with the moon and tides! I love that gorgeous macro!! Absolutly stunning!
    Have a wonderful week..I imagine it must be Sunday in your part of the world?
    Regina-

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  12. I honestly think I could save the fare and the bottle of tequila would take me far enough away for it to be called a vacation.

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  13. you have a vivid imagination,
    you expressed your beach time in playful and wise way...
    Happy May!

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