Friday, March 13, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday...

on friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more,
no less. if you want to join in the fun and give it a your story and report it to G-man

It's 1.30am and yes I'm going to bed as soon as I click publish. This poem makes sense right now...hopefully it still will when I get up in the morning. Have a great Friday everyone!

Imagine a dream
playing in your

can you see me in your
dream--in the
dark of your night
do you recognize me

am I just a dream
enriching your shadow
coloring the black
and white of your mind

leaning across the bed
listening to you breathe
reaching out to
touch you--do you know me



  1. Ok my mind is now in the gutter and you know how hard that is! xooxox

  2. Sounds like my cat but I think not!
    Excellent 55 My Dear...
    Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Wonderful Week-End....G

  3. Makes good sense to me. Nice poem!

  4. no one ever really knows someone, do they? i loved the poem. great job :)

  5. It makes perfect sense... and it's perfectly written.

  6. Well hell, my mind stays in the gutter, but this is tasteful... still makes "anxious" but in a tasteful way. ;)


Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.