on friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more,
no less. if you want to join in the fun and give it a
try...post your story and report it to G-man
It's 1.30am and yes I'm going to bed as soon as I click publish. This poem makes sense right now...hopefully it still will when I get up in the morning. Have a great Friday everyone!
Imagine a dream
playing in your
head
can you see me in your
dream--in the
dark of your night
do you recognize me
am I just a dream
enriching your shadow
coloring the black
and white of your mind
leaning across the bed
listening to you breathe
reaching out to
touch you--do you know me
Love,
Ok my mind is now in the gutter and you know how hard that is!...lol. xooxox
ReplyDeleteSounds like my cat but I think not!
ReplyDeleteExcellent 55 My Dear...
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Wonderful Week-End....G
Makes good sense to me. Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteno one ever really knows someone, do they? i loved the poem. great job :)
ReplyDeleteIt makes perfect sense... and it's perfectly written.
ReplyDeleteWell hell, my mind stays in the gutter, but this is tasteful... still makes me...er... "anxious" but in a tasteful way. ;)
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