Friday, June 26, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday...




I tore you apart
scattered your body
across the cosmos;
each piece a trillion stars,
blazing, sparkling, lighting
the night sky with their
brilliance.

My burning hands gathered
you, broke open your chest,
returned to you
each radiant star that

sizzles around
your heart
fills your void
gives you back to yourself
reborn, renewed;

Alive.

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12 comments:

  1. Almost metaphyiscal, this one. Excellent.

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  2. We dragons have trouble with symbols. we keep seeing that poor man being torn apart and we didn't even get to eat him.
    Great 55 though

    Ours is posted

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  3. Spiritual, physical, and emotional.

    wow!

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  4. Eaton...

    The best one yet today...

    Thank You so much for sharing with us all...

    Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End
    Galen

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  5. Great poetry. well written!

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  6. Naw just leave me scattered across the universe.

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  7. You have such a way with words.

    I like this very much.:)

    Mine's up too.

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  8. The cosmology of Eaton. Interesting.

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  9. E.

    I can't stop reading this...
    thanks love,

    G.

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  10. wow that was different. great job on the 55 :)

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