I tore you apart
scattered your body
across the cosmos;
each piece a trillion stars,
blazing, sparkling, lighting
the night sky with their
brilliance.
My burning hands gathered
you, broke open your chest,
returned to you
each radiant star that
sizzles around
your heart
fills your void
gives you back to yourself
reborn, renewed;
Alive.
~ ~
Have a wonderful Friday and weekend everyone. Love to you all.
If you've written 55 words, no more no less, drop
in on G-Man, leave a comment and he will happily
pay you a visit.
Almost metaphyiscal, this one. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteWe dragons have trouble with symbols. we keep seeing that poor man being torn apart and we didn't even get to eat him.
ReplyDeleteGreat 55 though
Ours is posted
Spiritual, physical, and emotional.
ReplyDeletewow!
Eaton...
ReplyDeleteThe best one yet today...
Thank You so much for sharing with us all...
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End
Galen
Nicely written...xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry. well written!
ReplyDeleteNaw just leave me scattered across the universe.
ReplyDeleteYou have such a way with words.
ReplyDeleteI like this very much.:)
Mine's up too.
The cosmology of Eaton. Interesting.
ReplyDeleteE.
ReplyDeleteI can't stop reading this...
thanks love,
G.
wow that was different. great job on the 55 :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
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