Have a great Friday everyone. :)
Sarcasm
spawned in spite
choked out
from under a
collar and leash
tritely delivered
with educated
expertise
laid waste on the
altar of artlessness
spilled from marble lips
useless in their
profanity
a bitter voice
hidden behind
slick words
delivered in
slippery soliloquy
spewed from that
sad, lofty
Ivory tower...
a mean and
jealous spirit.
~
Love,
You amaze me! I am in awe of your ability to convey raw emotion through poetry. I could taste the bile. Great 55!
ReplyDeleteWhoo Eaton. You were churned weren't you?
ReplyDeleteI bet writing this made you feel better ...
June in Oz
Churned?...hahahaha
ReplyDeleteExcellent 55 Eaton, thank you so much for sharing this gem with us all.
I hope you have fun doing these because thats the idea.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End.
well done. it nicely dovetails gman's as well!
ReplyDeleteThat was very powerful-well written an a good read!
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry and a great 55, I'm very impressed! :)
ReplyDeleteDear Eaton,
ReplyDeleteStrongly spoken without being harsh.
The truth shall set you free.
Hope and wish all well for you, young one.
From Felisol 59
What beautiful poetry and what truth is expressed. Boldly set forth but in a delicate manner. Great job. D
ReplyDeleteTruly amazing. Your words bring forth such an emotion. You are a wonderful writer.
ReplyDelete55 words, and the message is loud and clear. well written!!!
ReplyDeleteDamn girl.
ReplyDeleteThat was intense. You don't even have to know the specifics to get the idea here!
I loved this!
ReplyDeleteStrangely enough, I could put a face to this, a person who shall remain nameless, but who is indeed "a mean and jealous spirit."
great stuff...very intense.
ReplyDeleteFabulous 55! ;-)
ReplyDeletetruely artistic! great 55 :)
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