Sunday, April 19, 2009

Poem a day challenge...

Day 18 Prompt: Interaction


Her face pale and full of
uncertainty
blue eyes searching green

His face grim
rigid with decision

she: Why

he: Because I don't
feel the same

she: But I do
please we can work
it out

he: No
I don't love you anymore

he gave her all the reasons
hurt her to the quick

he: I'll take you home

she: turned and walked away

~~


More than half way there... :)



Love,

2 comments:

  1. This is pretty cool Eaton... this was a prompt (interaction)? How would I join in? Or is todays too late? I just wrote one- kind of the same thing going on around me...

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Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright

Falling Water by Frank Lloyd Wright
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Flat Stanley near Castlemaine, Victoria.