Poem a day challenge...second last day!
Day 29 Prompt: Never...
Never be the same
Words fell from my mouth
I couldn't stop them
realities you didn't expect
I hadn't considered the
impact
not one thought at all
never be the same
echoes in my head
thing is
I don't believe I would
alter a word even if it
changed your mind
sadly from a distance
I remain most tenderly
yours
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I submitted the poem with the crossed out lines in it. When I blogged the poem I realized I didn't like those two lines, but they connect the poem to the prompt.
~sigh~ :)
Love,
I really like the crossed out lines. I think it adds to the poem.
ReplyDeleteFabulous as always!
I thought you did it for effect!
ReplyDeleteI liked the poem as it is.
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my eye wanted to add "It will" at the head of the crossed out verse.
ReplyDeleteI like this because no matter how much you would "take it back" there is never a guarantee that the hearer will give the words back.
i'm gonna miss your poem... this is beautiful!
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