Indigo blue, indelible in a crease-less velvet~~
sea of stars, securely woven into the fabric
of night, oblivious to the naked search
of an eye
Lone stars reflect a single poignant truth,
witnesses to an unfolding destiny, undeniable
in brilliant clarity - observed in a period of
time intoned in the voice of an angel.
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Spring is here and looking her very best in Melbourne. It's warm and sunny, with a whole lot of humidity...very inspirational for writing 55's. Have a wonderful weekend everyone. :)
Love,
Eaton
You've captured the true depth of the universe here. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteGreat 55. I love the picture, too.
ReplyDeletewhat a harmonious 55...and the pic plays well with it! i could swim in your words.
ReplyDeleteYou are so beautifully amazing Eaton...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for this breathtaking 55...
You Rock The World!
Have a Great Week-End....G
i don't know which is more soothing... your words or the picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone, this one filled me with peace as i wrote it. :) I'm out of town for 36 hours...will visit more 55's when i get back. Eaton.
ReplyDeleteThe angels tone rings through clear and brilliant.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful 55. I'm always amazed at the ability of one to put together something both lovely and meaningful in very few words. I came via Shadow's site, by the way. I like your space...
ReplyDeleteNevine
This is fabulous..your words to this unbelievably enchanting capture- smooth!
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful.. I enjoyed it so much.. you write so well... thanks
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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smart entry...
ReplyDeleteGlad that you still entered your piece.
love the imagery.
perfect poem!
beautifully penned Eaton. Lovely
ReplyDeleteLuke @ WordSalad
What could be more beautiful? Like the deep serene yet mysterious universe.. awesome!
ReplyDeleteWords of an angel, really enjoyed this poem!
ReplyDeleteCreative. I like it.
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