A borrowed pic, at odds with the poem?
An insoluble trickle of tears illuminating fears
leaked from past encounters licking scabbed
wounds.
Compounded by loneliness, tested in the
oven of ire, fired in the kiln of passion, eager
for recompense.
Bound by a pitiably unending framework
of emotions.
Tangled in cords unraveling
thread by thread each strand of
angry frustration...
desperate,
seeking revenge.
Have a great Friday and weekend 55'ers. It's good to be back in the land of writing! :)
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This sounds like the moment before an explosion. Excellent.
ReplyDeletegreat 55. you pull us right into the emotions of the moment. love it!
ReplyDeletemy 55 is up!
And this is why I do not piss off a woman if I can avoid it.
ReplyDeleteThe picture goes great with the first part. As for the rest - character growth? :)
ReplyDeleteOh no..the last lines were the nail! Great job Eaton! Ha..
ReplyDeleteYes Eaton, it sure is wonderful to have you back.
ReplyDeleteI missed this creative beauty.
Excellent 55 My Dear.
You are always one of my favorite reads of the day.
Thanks for this little Gem, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
A great angry 55.
ReplyDeleteEaton Dear...LOVED your pics!
ReplyDeleteI didn't see a comment box!
See Ya Next week....Galen
powerful flow.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing!
Great diction, good job at building the tension too.. This is fabulous, Eaton :)
ReplyDeleteLull before the storm?? Powerful words. Intense Imagery.. very well done :)
ReplyDeleteAnger, vengeance, grit..
xoxox
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Very well written.. perhaps first visit from me and I am happy to be here.. thanks also for your encouraging visit to my page.. look forward to many more interactions here..
ReplyDeletebeautiful image...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the showcase of challenge.
This fits so well to the prompt.
ReplyDeletePamela
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteHarsh.. ouch. Could feel that pain, man. So you the poet must have done yr job.
ReplyDeleteNice one
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