Monday, September 13, 2010
you've been gone too long...
sing again summer, of your brilliant mornings
damp with expectation,
your heat-dazed afternoons and breathless nights
when will you arrive, your extremes bursting upon us
burning cities and land alike,
exhausting us into replicas of limp rag-dolls
although we are burnt-out at your leaving
the fever is sadly missed in the barren
months before your return
you never stay long, perhaps it is our lassitude
you take pity on.
~~
Summer is on its way! :))
Love,
Eaton.
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Cool and splendid. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
remarkable image,
ReplyDeleteyour words run like birds flying...
thanks for sharing!
Happy monday!
ReplyDeleteyour support makes me smile!
cheers!
love your talent.
Oh amazing, love your words and the image, flowing within the edge of your poem :3 truly wonderfully written<3
ReplyDeleteThank for sharing and happy poetry potluck^^~
Summer is just like this...
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully expressed!
Turn off the A/C, break out the sweaters and get your camera ready - Autumn's upon us!
ReplyDelete(I'm ready for this hot summer to go!)
Thanks for passing this dish for the potluck!
Loved the wordflow, great imagery my friend and thanks for linking with Potluck!! Hugs x
ReplyDeleteseasons come and seasons go..soon enough they will be back and i will be missing the next..smiles. nice write...
ReplyDeleteSuper description of summer! The words just flow.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem--so beautifully written. I enjoyed it and felt it with all my senses.
ReplyDeletethank you,
Angela
Nice ode to summer. Captures the season well. - bill
ReplyDeleteMade me wistful for many things.
ReplyDeletegreat feel towards the ending..
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