on friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more,
no less. if you want to join in the fun and give it a
try...post your story and report it to G-man
movement
in the shadows
slow,
deliberate
the still of night
disturbed on a
sigh
discarded clothes
rustle to the floor,
an edgy silence
broken
you've come
as promised
have I made
a mistake?
reassure me
ease my jagged
nerves; soothe
me
with a sharp
twist of
silk
bind me
with the
illusion of your
touch
~
Love,
Wow...hmmm ok in the gutter now! xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteWhew! I'm all a-jangle Eaton.
ReplyDeleteJune in Oz
Wow! I love
ReplyDeletebind me
with the
illusion of your
touch
Incredible!
BTW, did you post this on G-man's 55 friday site? There's a link on my post.
wonderful piece!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat work. Thanks for stopping by for a visit and leaving such a wonderful comment. We both did our first 55, and I hope you and I will see each other in blogland often with our writings. It was fun.
ReplyDeleteWOW is right...
ReplyDeleteFor some reason, in the last two weeks, the very last entry of the day has been THE BEST ONE!
Excellent 55 My Dear!!!
Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with us and the world.
Thank you also for visiting, and please join in the fun next Friday...Galen
my goodness that was awesome! it's so great seeing so many new people doing 55. i had been out of the loop for a cpl of weeks, but hopefully i'm back in it for awhile lol
ReplyDeleteI'd love to say something wonderful about this peice, but it appears that it's all been said. That doesn't make it any less perfect though. This is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI may need to join in your 55 next week. E
You'
ReplyDeletere right, I did miss this one. I must have. Because otherwise I'd have had to say something keenly insightful.
Like... "Rawr!"
Whew! If I hadn't already been running a fever Friday night, I certainly would've been after this.
rawr!! super sexy, very nice imagery. awesome job! :)
ReplyDeleteTo heck with the illusion, I'll take the real thing. Is this illicit?
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! Love it!
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